Friday, January 19, 2018

summer learning adventure

fast our men are out there not going good we need bandages panicking what if i dont get there in time summer learning adventureok im here time to get to work

1 comment:

  1. Hi Daniel!

    I think this is the start to your story from the sentence starter?
    Just want to remind you that in order to receive full points for this activity you need to write 8-10 sentences following the sentence starter. :)

    I am hoping that maybes some of these questions might help you to continue your story...
    Where abouts are your men? What has happened to them?
    Where are you working? What do you need to do?
    What caused the banging?

    Looking forward to seeing how your story will end Daniel!
    Ellee :)


    ReplyDelete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.