I think the poem is summaries very nicely because it covers all the bases of world war 1 and im just glad to be living in new Zealand away from war
I like it how the poem was well orded and i loved the starting sentanse
This is a really great start to this activity, you have some strong ideas here but in order to receive full points for this activity you need to add a little bit more details to your answer.
If you feel a little bit stuck here are some questions that you can think about that might help you out: - Is there something in particular you liked about the poem? - Do you have a favourite line? - Does anything in the poem remind you of something? - Is there anything in the poem you don't like?
I think that the poem is pretty cool, I really like the line about the poppies in between the crosses. I think that it's pretty nice that those who died for us are now resting somewhere beautiful between the flowers.
Let me know what you think Daniel! (If you need any help let us know!) Ellee :)
Hi Daniel!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really great start to this activity, you have some strong ideas here but in order to receive full points for this activity you need to add a little bit more details to your answer.
If you feel a little bit stuck here are some questions that you can think about that might help you out:
- Is there something in particular you liked about the poem?
- Do you have a favourite line?
- Does anything in the poem remind you of something?
- Is there anything in the poem you don't like?
I think that the poem is pretty cool, I really like the line about the poppies in between the crosses. I think that it's pretty nice that those who died for us are now resting somewhere beautiful between the flowers.
Let me know what you think Daniel! (If you need any help let us know!)
Ellee :)